The Falls

by DBKate, 1999
dbkate2@aol.com



Category: PWP, Slash, Q/O

Rating: NC-17

Warning: Romantic schmoop ahead! Man the Sappy Decks, Ahoy!

Disclaimer: These fine lads belong to the almighty George Lucas. Please don't sue me!

Archive: M_A and SWAL okay, anyone else, please ask only so I can visit and admire!

Feedback: Purty please? With little chocolate Obi-Wans on top? <batting lashes prettily>

Summary: A hot twilight, a waterfall and other nice stuff.



Jedi weren't supposed to sweat.

Or, at the very least, they were supposed to have the decency to pretend that mere mortal perspiration was somehow beneath them. A laughable breach of physical control that a first year Padawan would be mortified to be caught indulging in.

No, Jedi weren't supposed to sweat.

But contrary to the unspoken Code, Obi-Wan -was- sweating. Delorga was a steamy planet and he couldn't help but feel damp and vaguely gritty beneath a tunic that had seen better, less stressful, days.

Not that escaping an entire cadre of Nieftchans wasn't par for the course.

He sighed and leaned back against the huge base of an ancient Yuccat tree. Studied his wild surroundings and decided that in some ways they were an improvement over his and Qui-Gon's usual accommodations. The palatial rooms that were almost always ridiculously too large or mystifyingly cramped and cold, depending on the sovereign's personal inclinations toward Jedi Knights who came "calling."

At least there was fresh air and life surrounding them.

Even if it was hot muggy air.

He shifted again, the sweat beginning to trickle down his neck, leaving itchy trails where it dried. Heard the inviting rush of a nearby waterfall and peered at the tempting glisten of a shallow stream that ran through their encampment. Imagined cool, fresh water running down his body and had to bite back a groan.

Glanced at his Master, wondering if he were anywhere near as uncomfortable, but no, Qui-Gon seemed perfectly calm and content as always. Dry-looking even.

So much for mortal perspiration.

Obi-Wan watched as his Master sat engrossed with a small piece of wood and a tiny old-fashioned carving blade. Relaxed, but completely focused on his task, Qui-Gon's peaceful profile was at once a study in nobility and wisdom. It was not at all sweet looking, not even classically lovely, Obi-Wan decided.

No, his Master was not pretty, that was for certain.

He was beautiful.

A different sort of heat ran through Obi-Wan at the realization and he quickly turned his sights to the fire, concentrating hard on its flickering embers, but that did little except make him hotter.

And that was the last thing he needed.

The gurgle of the stream, the rush of the waterfall, Qui-Gon's perfect profile . . . it was all conspiring to drive him mad, he decided. If the Nieftchans discovered his whereabouts, they were going to find nothing but a wet tunic and light saber lying in a puddle, he mourned.

If only he could take a quick dip in that river. Just a short, little, tiny . . .

As if reading his mind, Qui-Gon spoke without looking up from his carving. "You'll find a batch of sass root at the base of that clokus tree to your left, Padawan. It's an excellent cleanser and emollient when mixed with water. Just break off the tips and rub it between your palms before applying it."

Yes, his Master was amazing all right, Obi-Wan thought, smiling. He quickly rose, took a moment to pluck the sass root that was exactly where Qui-Gon said it would be and bounded to the river's edge.

Tore off his itchy tunic, hopped ungracefully when he yanked off his boots and hesitated shyly before removing the rest. Glanced back at Qui-Gon who was still completely engrossed in his carving and decided that it really didn't matter. Over the years, they'd seen each other in every possible combination of undress, so what difference would an outdoor bath make?

Or so he hoped.

Obi-Wan waded easily through the shallow brook, heading upstream to where the call of the waterfall continued to beckon. Finally saw a sheer curtain of water falling onto an shelf of flat rocks and practically leapt toward it.

Stood beneath its cold, fresh torrent and felt reborn.

He nearly laughed aloud at the shock of it, the cold, massaging pressure beating down against his chest, stomach and legs. Tilted his head back and let the rush of water flow over his face, leaving him pleasantly breathless . . . lightheaded even.

Gasping, he stepped closer to the rock wall and took a breather in the space provided and peered out over the river through the waterfall.

Took a moment to appreciate the life that surrounded him and enjoyed the sight of swaying grasses, floating plants and flowers; high green hills that rose majestically on every side. Watched as tiny moving flecks of silver darted through the water, large schools of small fish swimming by, leaping up to catch an insect or two.

None of it escaped his notice. The Force was a strong and bountiful power, Obi-Wan thought reverently. Very strong indeed.

He took another dizzying plunge into the torrent, then stepped back into the alcove to retrieve the sass root. Broke off the tips and crushed it between his palms as Qui-Gon instructed and was surprised to see a foaming liquid emerge from its leaves.

Experimentally, he rubbed it over his body and through his hair, enjoying its sweet smell. He could feel it work immediately, cleansing off the grit and sweat that had been plaguing him for hours.

Just another example of Qui-Gon's nearly endless range of knowledge he thought, feeling a student's pride in his teacher. Of course, he also remembered Qui-Gon's "helpful" application of disinfectant juice from a batch of stinging ikus leaves to a few of his old lacerations, but . . .

He'd just gone back under the water to rinse off when he felt the presence behind him.

Whirled and nearly slipped off the rocks when he was caught by two strong hands that at once balanced him and held him up.

"Master," he gasped. "Forgive me, but I was startled."

"My apologies," Qui-Gon replied easily.

Obi-Wan felt a hot blush fill his cheeks. Felt at once foolish and not a little embarrassed. "I suppose I should be more alert."

A chuckled reply. "Perhaps."

Obi-Wan blushed again, forcing himself to concentrate on Qui-Gon's dark blue eyes and ignore the almost overwhelming temptation to stare at the rest of him . . . stark naked and as beautiful as any riverside.

But his Master didn't seem to notice. "It's a lovely land here," Qui-Gon said, before stepping into the waterfall. He tilted his head back and pushed long hair away from his forehead with slim fingers as Obi-Wan gave into temptation, drinking in the sight of his long body, finely muscled and shining, iridescent with droplets of fresh water.

The falls, the hills, everything fell away, their beauty paling in comparison.

"Padawan?"

"Ye . . . yes, Master?" he stuttered, immediately yanked out of his reverie.

"I said . . . any more of that sass root lying about?"

"Oh. Oh, yes, I think that some remains," Obi-Wan stuttered. He peered around the alcove and spied a few more stalks lying beside him. Swallowed hard and handed them to Qui-Gon with a small grin. Began to feel like a young fool, or at the very least, a wet hot-blooded fool.

But again, Qui-Gon didn't seem to notice. He merely broke the stalks open and began to wash in a leisurely manner. "Did you notice the terrans flying by before, Padawan?"

No, he did not. He, Obi-Wan Kenobi, was too busy staring at his naked, gorgeous Master, he thought dryly, biting his lip. "No, Master, I didn't," he replied. Keeping his tone respectful.

"They're quite amazing and beautiful. Some are the size of small fighters and are worshiped by the native peoples of this planet."

Obi Wan nodded again, trying very hard to concentrate on his Master's words instead of staring.

//Amazing . . . beautiful . . . worshiped . . . //

No, that wasn't working at all.

"It's in places like this you can feel the Force most freely, Padawan, places where you are surrounded by life. It works its way into you, through you . . . concentrate and you will feel it."

Obi-Wan nodded. Saw a pair of deep blue eyes, ever wise, staring into his and he drew in a shuddering breath at the sight.

Yes, he could certainly feel it. The surging rushes of water becoming one with the tide of blood aching through his veins, along with the heavy throb between his legs. The beating of his heart, in tandem with the river's flow.

Heard Qui-Gon's voice low in his ear. "This is the Force. This is life, Obi-Wan."

Time stood still when Obi-Wan felt the touch of a thumb along his lower lip, tracing gently, thoughtfully, as if noticing the soft outline of it for the very first time.

Obi-Wan heard himself gasp and gave into it. He could scarcely see through the light spray of water, could barely draw another breath before he was being kissed and then, he was kissing back with abandon, hands tangling in long, wet hair, feeling the heat of two erections touching, cool hips and thighs bumping . . . torsos, backs and arms entangling, all of them cool and slippery with wetness.

The same skillful and maddening fingers that traced his mouth were touching his nipples, teasing them to hardness until they were tender enough to make him want to pull away. Almost.

There were lips sliding down his neck, kissing, nipping, then sucking at the hollow between his shoulder and throat. Obi Wan was panting with the same breathless exultation he'd felt beneath the falls, desperately wanting to give in to his knees trembling demand that he sink to the ground and relinquish any pretense of control.

Felt himself spun around, with his face pressed against the thick moss that clung to the rock walls. Hands kneading his hips, gentle fingers caressing, then spreading him before he felt one, then the second enter, slowly . . . carefully.

He groaned and held onto the rock for dear life.

Shut his eyes tightly and whimpered when the fingers withdrew only to be replaced by a more demanding pressure, slick and burning hot, filling him, mixing pain and pleasure as one.

Heard Qui-Gon whispering in his ear. Breathless. "You don't know, but I see them, beloved, I see them, even when you don't."

Obi-Wan could smell the sass root and felt a hard thrust, followed by another, and another, whimpering as Qui-Gon's hips pounded against him. A warm, slippery hand found its way to his cock, with fingers caressing its sensitive underside, thumbing its leaking tip, then stroking its length ... hard. He arched into its maddening rhythm, moaning loudly, no longer caring about any loss of control.

"Looking at you, staring . . . desiring. Everywhere we go, the entire room turns to stare. And you, you beloved, never notice."

Oh, how could I notice, Obi Wan thought, biting his lip, trying to stifle the scream that was threatening at the back of his throat. How can I notice when there is no one but you, Qui-Gon. Nothing exists, but what you have shown me.

And you've shown me more than I ever would have believed.

Felt harsh kisses along the tender nape of his neck, small bites at his shoulder and Obi-Wan arched back, giving in to his body's demands. Met each stroke with matching energy and heat, crying out when the spiral began, his hips pistoning involuntarily.

Heard the words in his ear, breathless. Passionate. "And every time they stare, that's when I take you. Take you as my own and give my life to you. That is my life now . . . right here, one with you. Beloved."

He came then, bright lights flashing beneath his closed lids, his entire body shuddering and then sagging with release. Felt Qui-Gon tense behind him and follow him over the edge with a moan.

Followed by a ragged whisper. This time reverent. "This is life, love. You are my life."

Obi-Wan attempted to catch his breath his body still bowed against the moss covered rock and Qui-Gon's weight still warm and welcome behind him.

"Is this some sort of new lesson, Master?" he asked quietly, opening his eyes and turning his head to receive another soft kiss. "Because if it is . . ."

"Yes?"

"I think I'm ready to learn more."

Smiled at the answering chuckle and closed his eyes again, hearing the river's call and feeling the life flowing everywhere around him, shining incandescently, as it had never done before.

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NOTE: I was just in the mood for some smutty schmoop before I got back into my "Illusion's Song" angst-fest. Yes, even we Evil Sith Authors get in our moods for brain candy. Okay, now back to that miserable moon... <g>