Obi-Wan's Smile

by Laura Shapiro
(laura@humandesign.com)



ARCHIVE: Whatever, but leave my name attached

RATING: NC-17

SPOILERS: Eentsy ones for TPM -- the story is set just before the first reel of the film.

SUMMARY: I don't like summaries.

DISCLAIMER: (snort) As if. George Lucas lives about a hundred miles from me, but otherwise this has nothing to do with him. Don't sue me, I'm an unemployed student, and I mean no harm. But I mean, come on, Liam Neeson and Ewan MacGregor -- what do you expect?

DEDICATION: For Spike, who groveled, and for Te, who insisted

AUTHOR'S NOTES: Profuse apologies to all SW fanatics for any contextual errors. I enjoy Star Wars as much as any gal born in 1969, but I'm not up on the mythology and I've only seen The Phantom Menace once. So please excuse mistakes, and by all means, let me know if I get stuff wrong! I'm happy to make any necessary changes.

FEEDBACK: I'm greedy greedy greedy. :) Feed me at laura@humandesign.com.



"Master?"

Qui-Gon looked up from his computer terminal. They were still about two hours from Naboo, and while he felt confident in his understanding of the situation there he felt it prudent to spend the trip continuing his research into the culture.

Obi-Wan gestured to the illuminated board in front of him. "How about a game?" Good-humored mischief played across the younger man's open features.

Damn him, Qui-Gon thought with affection. He never would settle down. True, Obi-Wan had come a long way since his unfocused youth, could now comport himself with all the discipline required of a Jedi. If he chose.

He forced himself to return his gaze to the terminal. "Obi-Wan, I'm working now. As you should be."

"Here we are, light-years from any responsibilities, with a few hours before anything official is expected of us. Why not relax, for a change?" One of the game's holographic animals made a vaguely obscene gesture in Qui-Gon's direction. "I'll even let you win."

Qui-gon snorted.

"Come on, Master. What can you possibly expect to learn about Naboo that you don't already know? And besides, didn't you teach me to enter any new situation with a clear head?" He rose from his chair and waved his hand between Qui-Gon's face and the terminal. "You're not going to clear your head that way. Only cram it full of useless facts which may cloud your judgment at the crucial moment."

His Master met his eyes, taking in Obi-Wan's mocking humor, unarguable logic, and something else, something that challenged him in a way that had nothing to do with their Knight/Apprentice relationship. Or maybe everything. Qui-Gon licked his lips and instantly regretted the weakness, as Obi-Wan took it in. Still, there was a lesser evil here.

"All right, Obi-Wan. It's clear you've learnt your lessons well. Let's have a game."

His Apprentice smiled broadly, and Qui-Gon was flooded with fondness in spite of himself. He smiled back. When it seemed to Qui-Gon that they'd been grinning at each other for a bit longer than was strictly necessary, Obi-Wan sat down and punched a few buttons on the gameboard.

For once, Qui-Gon did not instruct his Apprentice in the strategic arts during the game, did not, when his moves failed, counsel him on what he should have done. Qui-Gon had decided to let the young man lead himself. Besides, Obi-Wan was right. He could do with a little relaxing, and it was seductively pleasant to be free of the necessity of Being An Example at every moment. In fact --

"You cheated!" Obi-Wan's face was a mixture of shock and horror. Qui-Gon leaned back in his chair and crossed his arms over his broad chest, eyes twinkling.

"You--" all at once, his Apprentice burst into laughter. "You cheated! I can't believe it!"

"You're always telling me I take things too seriously."

"Yes, but I..." he was giggling too hard to finish.

"If I'd known this would delight you so, I'd have done it before now." Obi-Wan's giggles stopped abruptly and he looked sharply at his Master. Qui-Gon cringed inwardly, cursing his too-quick tongue, not for the first time.

"Oh you would?" Obi-Wan was looking frankly at his mouth now. "I didn't realize my delight was so important to you."

Qui-Gon stood hastily. "Yes, well...thank you for the game, Obi-Wan. I'm going to spend the rest of the trip...meditating, I think..." he started for the ship's perfunctory living quarters, but found himself restrained by his Apprentice's strong hand on his arm. The younger man looked intently into his eyes.

"You don't want to do that."

My god, was Obi-Wan trying to use the Force against him? No, he realized. These were his own feelings speaking to him, with such a vehemence that he swayed slightly on his feet. Obi-Wan was right. He didn't want to meditate. He wanted...oh.

Oh.

And then the younger man's lips were on his own, and he lost all reason in that soft warm insistence. This had to be wrong, he insisted to himself, as his whole body screamed its acquiescence and his hands found Obi-Wan's rusty hair, pulling him closer. His mouth opened to his Apprentice's questing tongue, relishing the slither of hungry muscle as it stroked his own, then dove deeper, scrubbing the last of his objections from his overloading brain.

Both men moaned into the kiss, Qui-Gon's hands fisting in Obi-Wan's hair, the younger man already working to loosen his Master's tunic. Qui-Gon smiled into the kiss. Always too eager, this one.

"What?"

"Nothing." And Qui-Gon kissed him this time, brushing his lips against Obi-Wan's and then sucking them, first the lower, then the upper, then the lower again, into his mouth. Obi-Wan giggled.

"Tickles."

His Master's response was to bury his face in the other man's neck, devouring his throat in a series of increasingly ravenous bites. Obi-Wan moaned and thrust against him, his still-shirted chest pressing against Qui-Gon's now bare one as his tunic puddled on the floor. Obi-Wan trailed his fingers through the other man's chest hair and then pinched a nipple. Hard.

Lightning arced through Qui-Gon as the almost-pain concentrated everything wonderful and right into the tiny point between Obi-Wan's fingertips. He threw his head back, lost in the dancing light for a moment, and then Obi-Wan's mouth claimed the other nipple for its own.

Helplessly, Qui-Gon dragged them both down to the floor, holding the other man on top of him as firmly as he could, never wanting that perfect suckling pressure to end. Tiny currents were running from Obi-Wan's mouth to his own nipple to his cock, and he hoped Obi-Wan could feel them too so that he would know that he should never, ever stop.

The Obi-Wan's thigh drove against his cock, and everything else became senseless distraction. Qui-Gon growled and dragged Obi-Wan's mouth up to his own, thrusting hard against Obi-Wan's erection with his own. Obi-Wan's turn to growl, and he rode his Master hard for a few precious moments, thrusting a counterpoint with his tongue.

Then Qui-Gon was robbed of his kiss as Obi-Wan slid down again, his mouth roaming over the other man's chest and belly, his hands deftly working trouser fastenings until - oh - those too-soft lips closed around the head of Qui-Gon's cock. Hot, soft, yet intense, the Apprentice's mouth drew groans from him as it slid down his length, back up again, down...Obi-Wan's hand caressed his balls gently in smooth circles all the while, sending aching waves through the gathering tightness in his groin.

Obi-Wan was moving fast (impatient or just hungry?), and all of Qui-Gon's self-control exercises couldn't save him. He didn't want to be saved, unless it was by that impossible, oh god amazing tongue, those pliant lips, the hand now following the mouth up and down. Yes, yes, oh please, and the Jedi Knight tightened his hands in his Apprentice's hair and came, a sharp shout and protracted bucking, holding on for dear life.

Obi-Wan drank him down, riding the waves of his orgasm with a cool confidence that might have astonished Qui-Gon had he been able to notice it. The aftershocks rippled through him for seeming-eternities, and then just before sensation became too much, Obi-Wan released him and slid back up the length of his body to give Qui-Gon a taste of himself.

Qui-Gon kissed him with gratitude, passion, and something like pride, and then fell back to catch his breath. His Apprentice regarded him, propped on an elbow.

"I told you you needed to relax."

Sweat plastered Obi-Wan's ruddy hair to his temple in matted curls, glistened on his brow and nose. His tanned cheeks were rosy; stubble flanked his swollen mouth.

Qui-Gon grinned briefly, then held out his hand, focused for an instant. Obi-Wan's tunic and trousers untied themselves and flew across the cabin. Qui-Gon allowed himself a few minutes to study the now-laughing Obi-Wan's golden body, chest and shoulders rounded with muscle, stomach flat and lean, sinewy flanks, the whole just dusted with reddish-brown furriness, fine and soft. It was a body he'd seen hundreds of times in their training, but never allowed himself to admire, much less wallow in.

His Apprentice reached for him, and Qui-Gon rolled on top of him, cupping his face in his hand. They held each other's eyes while Qui-Gon fruitlessly sought words, swallowed, gave in, and kissed him again, his hand moving to the younger man's cock which pressed against their bellies.

"Oh," Obi-Wan breathed, as Qui-Gon's thumb slipped over the tip, and again, and again, until Obi-Wan closed his eyes. Qui-Gon traced the thickening vein and then brought his palm up, licked it, and returned the hand to its proper place. Obi-Wan's cock thrived eagerly in his now-moist hand, felt so utterly at home there that Qui-Gon felt himself stirring again in empathic pleasure. He bent to tongue the younger man's nipple as his hand slid up, over, and down in a pulsing rhythm that made Obi-Wan's hips rise helplessly.

"Please..."

Qui-Gon smiled.

"Please...not yet...I want to...I want you."

Comprehension hit Qui-Gon in the stomach like a fist, but just as quickly the shockwaves dissipated into something that felt a lot like eagerness. And yet--

"I don't think..."

Obi-Wan looked at him intently. "Please, Master."

And then it was all right somehow, and Qui-Gon was lying down, lifting his legs, surrendering himself again to Obi-Wan's determined tongue, this time slippery against his bottom. Delicate ripples of pleasure spread out in sensitive waves and he felt himself opening under that licking, swirling, tickling, wet probing muscle. Abandonment for an instant, and then a blunt pressure of Obi-Wan's finger, and a sharp twisting pain, and then oh god thrusting, gently, opening him, and Qui-Gon grunted and concentrated and relaxed and suddenly it was all good, it could only be good.

"More."

Obi-Wan must have known his Master had allowed Jedi training to ease things, must have felt the sudden begging yawning cavernous hunger around his finger, because it was replaced almost instantly with his moistened cock. No pain this time, no resistance, as fluid as rain and just as inevitable, Obi-Wan's cock slid home.

Both men moaned and Obi-Wan leaned forward, clutching his Master's shoulders as he thrust slowly, but with intensity. Qui-Gon gripped his forearms, breathing hoarsely, his cock smearing his belly with glassy trails. So full, so much, so good, and Obi-Wan rocked forward and back, savoring him, eyes squinched shut, litany of pleasure chanting itself across his face.

But it was Qui-Gon who groaned, Qui-Gon who grunted, Qui-Gon who hissed "yes" like a man who had never known control, much less instructed the other in its exercise. And still Obi-Wan pounded and strove, his fingers digging into the older man's straining biceps.

Qui-Gon could only watch him in abandon and love, rocked to the core and shuddering to receive every thrust, until a hoarse cry ripped another climax from him, spattering his chest.

Obi-Wan's eyes flew open to drink in his Master's pleasure, to drink it all, to take it all. Qui-Gon's spasms around him drew him further, drew him over, and his orgasm threw him against the other man in a series of shuddering gasps.

They lay tangled, Qui-Gon struggling to quell a leg cramp until Obi-Wan gently withdrew, forcing trembles from both, and lay down, exhausted.

"I suppose you feel that this is proper preparation for a diplomatic mission."

"You've taught me that diplomacy requires the ability to get inside another person --"

Qui-Gon clapped his hand over his Apprentice's mouth, laughing. He could feel Obi-Wan's smile under his hand.

END.