The Night Before the End

by Rosalita (rosalita1@mindspring.com)



Pairing: Q/O

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Category: PWP, First Time, POV

Rating/Warning: NC-17. M/M sex. If this bugs you or you're underage, run away fast!

Spoilers: TPM. A small one for the JA books.

Summary: The night before the big battle.

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Disclaimer: All characters belong to George Lucas. If they belonged to me, we would have seen more of Obi-Wan in the movie. I'm not making any money off this and no copyright infringement is intended. So please don't sue me.

This is kind of experimental. It started out as a poem, but didn't quite make it.



The softness of your skin surprises me always. I know not why this is so for I have touched you a thousand times.

These hands have corrected your fighting stance and searched your body for wounds. These arms have held you when you were sick and steered you to bed when you were drunk. I have patted your shoulder in reassurance and stroked your cheek with affection.

For all these reasons I have touched you. Tonight I touch you in love.



I start with your face. I place my hands there and hold you still for a kiss. Stubble tickles my palms, your lips are warm and alive under mine. Soft. I knew they would be. Your mouth opens to me and our tongues meet. They dance together.

We kiss for what seems like blissful eternity, until we are both breathless and I must pull back. I take this moment to look at you. Night has settled around us and the moon and brilliant stars of Naboo spill their light across your body.

I have waited so very long.

So many nights have I dreamt of you this way. Naked and beautiful and silvery. Waiting for me to give you pleasure.

I will give you so much pleasure, my love.

You want more kisses, and I oblige you, planting them on your eyelids, your nose, that lovely cleft in your chin. My lips touch a nipple briefly and it tightens at the slight contact. Your lips part in a sigh, igniting me as my fingertips whisper over your chest. Astonishing, the way your muscles ripple lightly in the wake of my hand. Your belly quivers, and you grab my hand.

So impatient, love! I'll get there soon enough. You must live in the moment, my Padawan.

I suppose I should stop teasing you, you look nearly undone. By the Force, but you are beautiful. Skin flushed, you tremble and pant. Your lower lip is plump from my kisses and your teeth as you bite it to keep from moaning aloud.

I lower my head to run my tongue down the line of reddish hair leading straight to your sex. Giving up on being quiet, you moan my name and arch, trying to interest me in your rather impressive erection.

I am interested, my love. Like the rest of you, it is beautiful. Long and slender and curving toward your belly. I pet it, caress it, wrap my hand around it and stroke upward, knowing by the sounds you are making that it pleases you.

I lick delicately at the head, catching a bead of milky liquid. So good, you taste so good. Sweet, as I knew you would be. I devour you sucking, licking, kissing, nipping--your balls, your cock, your belly, your thighs. You're very, very close.

Not yet.

Your scream of frustration nearly pierces my eardrum. I know you want to come. Soon.

Pleasure is beating at me; I can wait no longer. You know what I want, and you offer it to me, offer yourself to me, lifting and spreading your legs. Sliding my hands under your ass, I lift you to me, my mouth moving to that dark opening.

Using tongue, fingers, and a bit of the Force, I prepare you. When I'm sure you're ready, I press my aching erection to you and slide inside carefully. Hot and so very, very tight, you envelop me as I slide deeper and deeper until I'm all the way in.

For several moments, I don't move. I'm not sure I can; so overwhelmed am I by our joining. Your legs wrap around my waist and your arms are across my back. I have never been held so completely.

Ah, this feels right. It feels perfect, as if it were meant to be. Perhaps this is why Yoda was so insistent all those years ago. Perhaps he knew were my destiny lay.

I raise my head to look at you. If fire were green, it would look like your eyes. Slowly, I begin to move, trying to make it last although I know it won't.

You meet me thrust for thrust, clutching my arms, arching, moaning, writhing. Head thrown back, tender throat exposed to me. I plant my mouth on your pulse point, sucking gently.

Harder? You want it harder?

I shall give you what you beg for, my beautiful love.

A full-throated scream escapes your lips as I shift to pound against that exquisitely sensitive spot inside your body. Tight muscle clenches around me--squeezing me. Multi-colored bursts of light danced behind my eyes.

Come for me, Obi-Wan.

Now, Obi-Wan!

Oh.

Force.

Yeeees!

I collapse onto you, still thrusting, wringing the last sweet shudders from both our bodies.

Toads sing their nocturnal hymns as we lie, embracing, bodies still joined. Your hands are in my hair, stroking. Murmurs I hear in my heart speak to me of love and the future.

Beyond the trees, the Queen makes her final plans. In their sacred place, the Gungans prepare for battle. The sun will rise soon. We must also prepare.

And though I wish to hold you forever, I fear our time is short.

End.

11/22/99