Improvisation

by analise (analise@2cowherd.net)



Pairing: Q/O Rating: NC-17

Category: Smut, Smut, and more Smut. Oh, and PWP of course.

Archive: Yes to Master/Apprentice, Nesting Place and SWAL; all others please ask Warnings: No spoilers. Did I mention Smut?

Disclaimer: Characters belong to Lucas and gang.

Summary: Trapped in a cell together, Qui-Gon tries to teach his apprentice the art of passing time.

Author's notes: I did it! I wrote something short! You wouldn't believe the struggle I have in simply jotting down a quick story. No matter how small, it always ends up turning into a 150+K story. It wasn't easy, but I resisted plot this time. Voila! An actual PWP.



His moans sounded hollow and tin to his own ears. The sheets were rough and nappy under his greedy fingers... clasping, clutching, grasping for purchase against the bed. His hips arched up, the soft skin of his buttocks rasping against the pallet where the thin fabric had been pushed aside. Heated, humid suction engulfed his aching cock, hard fingers pressed red marks into the pale skin of his ass...alternately holding him still and pulling him up to meet the devouring mouth that kissed, sucked and licked.

Dark shadows spilled across the bed, uneasy partners with the pale lemon light of hyperspace that washed in the single porthole...painting the two entwined figures in a chiaroscuro of charcoal movement. One hand released its death-grip on the sheets, flailing for the soft silk of long silvered brown hair. Once tangled there, his fingers twined roughly in the strands, desperately pulling his tormentor closer, thrusting his hips up...fucking the willing mouth, sinking himself more completely in the hot wetness.

He was close, achingly close. But he ruthlessly quashed his release, cruelly biting the inside of his cheek, the pain bringing startling clarity through the passion haze. His head tipped back, his own mouth opening in a wordless cry as sharp teeth deliberately grazed the sensitive underside of his penis, payback for his rough hand. It only brought the blood-red lust down more firmly on his brain, coloring his remaining thoughts crimson.

An animal moan sounded again from somewhere deep in his gut, his crystal eyes fluttering shut momentarily. The swelling sensation was consuming him, eating him alive just as the hungry mouth sucking at his cock was. The hands were cruelly tight on his hips now, keeping him under control, forcing him to give up restraint, trying to make him lose it.

He caught the tip of his tongue between his teeth and used every ounce of self-possession to force himself up into a seated position, looking down at the top of the head that still suckled purposefully at his cock. Swallowing convulsively, tasting the metallic tang of blood in his mouth, he set his hands to the broad shoulders and wrenched the older man over onto his back, trying to dislodge him. The big hands would not let go of his hips and he found himself pulled over on top, unable to wrest control back into his own grip nor his cock from its wet, heated sheath.

Stars were starting to explode in his brain as the hands gripping him tightened, the mouth continued, determined. The pleasure was almost debilitating...his motor skills were fast deteriorating in the wake of his single, monumental effort to struggle free, to regain his wits.

A tortured growl was the only sound he could make as the hands on his ass started to pump him in and out, taking him in as deep as he could, a burning slick tongue sliding up and around the aching tip. His own fingers were indenting the oiled skin of the shoulders beneath him, the flesh white to the bone with the pressure. He was reduced to an animal, grunting and gasping as that final control was wrested from him and he shuddered hard once, twice and then howled as he came violently into the moist depths of the mouth beneath him.

There was no time for him to regain his senses before he found his suddenly boneless body flipped easily onto his back, his legs spread and lifted. When the hard, slick intruder pushed itself slowly inside him, filling him so completely that he felt it in his throat, he suspected unconsciousness might be pressing against his brain. Was it possible to die from pleasure?

The face above him was dripping with sweat, the wide mouth wet and glistening pink from its previous efforts. Tendrils of long, sandy hair stuck in fascinating swirls and curls to the broad forehead, dark blue eyes burned down at him. It was the eyes that told the story the body would not. As the slow, deliberate thrusts began, eye contact was not broken. Like two pack wolves, control was not relinquished by either irregardless of position.

His hands gripped the clenching buttocks, fingers digging into the hard flesh, pressing the movements onwards. Harder, faster. More.

More.

Wordless noises were issuing from his lover's mouth, the eyes half-lidded but still drilling into his own... even as control was fought for...

...and finally lost. Eyes squeezed shut as the muscular body over him tensed, veins standing out on the strong neck. He could feel the hard thickness that stretched him throbbing with release. A low growling moan rising through the half-dark of the room before the larger body collapsed upon his with a final gasp.

Silence filled the tiny room for several long minutes, broken only by the labored breathing of the two men at its center.

He pushed his lover off him with a grunt, lying still for a moment to slow his breath and then gracefully curling his body up into a sitting position, rubbing one hand across his close-cropped hair. He grinned down at the older man who currently lay face down across the too-small pallet, his teeth white in the half-light of space.

One finger trailed down the line of his Master's spine, feeling the damp moisture of sweat mixed with the remnants of the massage oil that had started this whole thing. It was easy to imagine that they were simply spending an idle span of time in bed. Easy to forget where they were.

Perhaps that was the point.

It was the point. His mouth flattened into a grim line as he remembered.

Without even thinking about it, he was suddenly uncoiling up off the pathetic pallet and stalking across the dirty floor to the door, heedless of his nudity. For the 20th time, he pressed his hands to the metal blast plate and stretched his senses down into the locking mechanism.

"Obi Wan.." The voice was a sigh behind him. The rebuke was faint, but present.

"I don't know how you can just sit there.." the young man fumed, pushing back from the door as he failed yet again to force the lock. He spun to face the older Jedi, Qui-Gon still on the pallet, reclining easily against the durasteel wall, his long legs folded casually at the ankles.

"If I recall, I wasn't just 'sitting here' a moment ago." The words were painted with mild humor.

The sigh was explosive, and he folded his arms across his chest, glaring. A soft chuckle was the only rejoinder. He let himself fall against the cold metal, his head slipping back until it met the door with a soft thunk.

"Obi Wan..," his Master's voice held a little more command this time. "Stop fretting. We've been over this. What does sulking get you in a crisis?"

"More than pretending there is no crisis!" He said, flaring into motion again, his slender body tense as he began to pace the breadth of the small room again. He could feel the heat of his lover's eyes as he moved, restless as a caged cat. "At least I'm trying to get us out of this!"

"How? What have you done so far that has gotten us any closer to getting out that door? Off this ship?"

He shook his head, the long weight of his braid tickling his collarbone.

"That's not the point. The point is that I don't want to wait here like some docile herdbeast for them to decide what they are going to do with us!"

The captain of the freighter they had been using as transport had inexplicably taken their weapons and locked them into the tiny room over five hours earlier, and then jumped into hyperspace. It made no sense, and that was part of the reason he was so aggravated by their situation. It had been a routine flight back to Coruscant. It drove him crazy, the lack of control or knowledge. The lack of the ability to even guess why they'd been captured. Qui-Gon was trying to get him to simply relax and wait, but he was finding himself unable to simply let his fate hang in limbo that way. He needed to act...to do something. Anything.

Apparently his Master did not have the same compulsion.

Another sigh from the shadows surrounding the pallet.

"As much as I'm enjoying the view, young Padawan. You are making me dizzy, come and sit."

Obi Wan paused momentarily mid-pace and then complied, sinking to the edge of the bed. He dragged his discarded cloak around his tightly muscled shoulders as an afterthought against the chill of the room, leaning his elbows down on his knees.

Qui-Gon did not touch him, but he leaned forward, his face dipping into the swath of half-light that streamed in through the porthole. His eyes were serene.

"Think for a moment, apprentice mine. Which is better? Pacing up and back across the room, beating your fists against an immovable door and raging to the Universe? Or," and now he lifted one hand and placed it softly on the strong column of the younger man's neck, painting soft circles with the pads of his fingers, "relaxing and resting yourself for the trials that might occur when that door does open?" The hand was kneading small knots of tension out of his muscles and he couldn't restrain the tiny moan of pleasure that puffed from his lips.

"I.." his voice stalled when soft lips suddenly replaced the fingers, nipping and nibbling at the flesh there. This seduction was very similar to what had happened an hour earlier, though he had been clothed that time.

"You what?" The words were breathed onto his neck, against the tender skin just below his ear. Gooseflesh rippled down his arms, his nipples tightening with sudden need.

He blinked, what had he been asked?

"Which is better?" Qui-Gon prompted him again, now touching his earlobe with the tip of his tongue.

Oh yeah. Better.

"I.." His voice was breathy, his fingers curling into the loose drape of his cloak. He was supposed to be arguing something. The thought kept him from bailing to the sensations. Qui-Gon could sense his reticence and withdrew just a hair, his lips only a whisper from his Padawan's ear. It allowed him to gather his wits. "I have to do something...I can't just sit.." he managed at last.

"Ah," warm breath tickled his neck, "but sometimes sitting is the answer."

He was rock hard again, regardless of the passion he'd just spent only 10 minutes earlier. His master's voice was pitched low and intimate. It was hard to hear the meaning when the delivery was so arousing.

"Or lying down.."

He swallowed. This was exactly how he'd been distracted earlier. Qui-Gon was doing it on purpose. He might have been annoyed, but it felt far too good. With a muted growl, he surrendered, twisting his body agilely around and bearing the bigger man down to the pallet. He was going to drive this time, he thought as he captured his Master's wrists and pinned them over his head, looking down at him with a mix of lust and irritation.

"You're trying to distract me..." he accused, finding the dark blue eyes in the dim light. They glittered with arousal and he could feel the hard body beneath him quickening with excitement. It made him catch his breath.

"Of course.." A smile, white teeth a slash in the murk. "Is it working?" he asked innocently.

Obi Wan lowered his mouth in answer.

The kiss was more of a battle than anything else, especially with the frustration of their situation burning so strongly in his blood. Whenever they made love it always contained some aspect of a delicious fight. The competition of it, the wildness of it, every new time was more exciting than the last. He had once caught a glimpse of them in a mirror, entwined in ecstasy, akin to two sleek predatory felines fighting for their share of the pleasure. It was breathtaking.

Their tongues clashed wildly together as he straddled the other man, sucking and biting open-mouthed at the lips beneath him, bodies grinding together in a sinuous dance. His cloak had slipped back off and now lay half-trapped underneath Qui-Gon. His hands still held his Master stretched and taut in his grip. Definitely his turn.

His lips and tongue and teeth traveled down chin, jaw, throat, collarbone.. pulling the trapped wrists with him, not relinquishing his power. He growled happily to himself as he found first one nipple, then the other, the sounds of pleasure his Master was making going straight to his balls. He could feel the hard heat of Qui-Gon's erection pressing into his stomach and he rubbed his navel against the weeping tip. The hissing breath warned him an instant before his Master tried to yank his wrists out of his grip.

He tightened his fists almost painfully. Not this time. Grinning into the light fur of the chest beneath his mouth, he continued to move lower and lower, leaving a hot, wet trail in his wake. Another moaning attempt at freedom from his lover just as he was about to taste the tip made up his mind for him. With surprise on his side and a little help from the Force, he twisted Qui-Gon over onto his stomach, pulling the trapped wrists up and crossing them easily at the small of the muscled back. Much easier to control now, he grinned to himself.

"Quietly thinking ways out of here, Master?" he rumbled, pressing his lips into the soft pad of flesh just above his ass and flicking his tongue out. The older man responded by thrusting his hips into the pallet and groaning. He bit down a little roughly, moving his lips onwards down over the sweet curve of Qui-Gon's flank, letting his tongue lave a long track of wet behind it.

He let go of the wrists, certain now of his control, grabbing ahold of the hips before him and lifting slightly, grinning as his Master's legs parted with the movement. Qui-Gon wasn't going anywhere now.

His lips traveled further down, nibbling on the tender insides of the older man's strong thighs. A moan rumbled from the head of the pallet, deep and wild as he breathed gently on the exposed balls that hung before him. His tongue flicked out again, curling under one of the soft sacs and pulling it back into the wet heat of his mouth. A hitching gasp sounded, Qui-Gon's whole body shuddering. His thumbs were digging into the muscular thighs, pushing them further apart as he took the second into his mouth, sucking gently on them together, letting his tongue soothe them, caress them. He could feel the throbbing need of his Master's cock only a whisper away from his lower lip and he darted his tongue out from the warmth of his mouth to tease the base of the heated shaft.

Qui-Gon was breathing heavily, his whole body an exposed nerve. He'd moved his hands up near his face and he was clenching the rough, worn pallet covering in his fists. It looked like the thought of regaining control of the situation had vanished from his mind with the onslaught of Obi Wan's latest attentions.

His own passions were becoming too wild to control and he let Qui-Gon's balls fall out of his mouth as he worked his tongue upwards, tasting the sweat and musk of his Master's arousal. The older man actually flinched when his tongue found the taut, puckered ring of muscle...laving it with saliva, gently working it open.

Qui-Gon was writhing against his tongue by the time he finally moved away, biting almost roughly at the flesh of one cheek before clasping the squirming hips and mounting his lover. His cock was slippery with a mixture of sweat, pre-cum and the remains of the oil they had used earlier...and he slid inside the tight passage with a groan that peeled his lips back from his teeth.

He began to rock, closing his eyes against the need to simply explode, thrusting upwards deliberately, forcefully...listening to the music of his lover's gasping moans. With an intensity that seemed to pull that familiar red cloud of lust over his eyes, he kept his movements slow and hard, letting the tight muscles clench almost painfully around him, stroking him, squeezing him.

One hand dropped down and up and around Qui-Gon's body, closing the other man's erection into his hand and beginning a sliding stroke up and down the engorged muscle. Qui-Gon bucked under him, a choked shout exploding from his lips, creating a delicious friction on his cock as he clamped down inside. He wasn't going to be able to keep any semblance of control much longer, his vision was dissolving into a crimson haze. He thrust harder, his hand moving in tandem along the velvet steel of his lover's penis...and then his Master was coming, shuddering and shaking with his release both inside and out. It was enough to push Obi Wan over as his cock was squeezed with the rhythmic contractions of the tight muscle that surrounded it.

He collapsed onto his master's back, rubbing his stubbled cheek in the sweaty dampness between Qui-Gon's shoulder blades.

"You did that on purpose." He murmured finally, almost sleepily.

Qui-Gon chuckled, deliberately collapsing under his apprentice and rolling him over to pull him into his arms.

"What if I did? I like you better this way then when you're pacing and fretting like a sulking child. It gets neither of us anywhere. Except maybe you end up clouding your mind with needless frustration...and I get a headache watching you."

He was silent for a long time and Qui-Gon looked down at him as if wondering if he'd fallen asleep. He settled his arms up behind his head, light blue eyes peering at the older man thoughtfully.

"Ok. So. Maybe I see your point." A sheepish grin. "We've already determined there's no way out. We have no food or water and we don't know how limited our air is. We don't know where we're going. We have to wait and find out more before we can act properly. And since we can't get out the door, we have to wait anyway."

Qui-Gon was smiling at him, pleased.

"Good, Padawan. I knew that once you got past your impatience, you would see my point." His master looked up then, his eyes flicking to the porthole. Obi Wan followed his gaze, surprised to see the glittering points of normal light that meant normal space. They had come out of Hyperspace.

Obi Wan twisted himself up and out of his Master's embrace, off the pallet, padding across the room to the round window and peering out. His brow lowered into a frown.

"Coruscant," he muttered in surprise, seeing the dark glittering mass of the planet below. No other world looked the same. He twisted his head over his shoulder to stare at Qui-Gon, his gaze suddenly suspicious. Why would they be back where they had started from? Why would a kidnapper take them to the heart of their power?

The older man was pulling his tunic closed and buckling his belt with a small smile on his face, the long hair somewhat askew. Obi Wan's crystal eyes narrowed to slits, but before he could open his mouth, his tunic was tossed at him. He automatically pulled it on, lips slightly parted in consternation.

"Better get dressed." Qui-Gon said cheerfully, swirling his cloak over his shoulders. "She'll be coming."

"Damn you..." Obi Wan fumed, realizing, "this was a test?" He yanked on his pants, trying to keep his temper up and failing. His master's smile was infectious....and he felt too good to be mad.

Even now he could sense the presence of the captain coming to open the door. A test. Of course. He should have realized that Qui-Gon, while enjoying his image of pure emotionless perfection, would never have been as collected as he had been over the past hours of 'captivity'. He would have noticed that if he hadn't been so worked up over their incarceration.

A lesson indeed.

He couldn't stop his mouth from quirking a little as he scooped up his cloak from the floor, crooking an eyebrow at the odd, wet stain on the hem. He had just settled it on his shoulders when the door opened and the captain poked her head in.

"We've arrived at Coruscant, as you ordered Master Jinn. Will there be anything else required of me?"

"No Captain. Thank you. Please arrange for a shuttle to take us to the surface."

She bowed slightly and strode back down the hall, leaving the door open.

"So." Obi Wan said, his arms akimbo, his stance loose. "A test. What was I supposed to learn here?" he asked, his voice almost teasing.. eyes burning with a hidden amusement.

"Patience. Restraint." Qui-Gon folded his hands into his sleeves, his eyes mild and almost mischievous. "The ability to see a situation for what it is and accept it. Perhaps even to accept that there might be nothing you can do about it."

Obi Wan moved towards the older man smoothly, almost like he was stalking him.

"And how does fucking my brains out achieve such a lesson?" His voice was a sultry whisper as he stood only inches from his master.

A chuckle and then Qui-Gon turned away, walking towards the door.

"Usually you try to get your frustrated Padawan to play chess to pass the time," he said smoothly. A long pause and then he grinned openly.

"I was improvising."

END